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Amazing, so much emption, tragedy, intense action. The perfect length too, nothing dragged out.

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Thank you! I always have a hard time getting the pacing right :) glad you liked it.

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Margot......when is this going to be published?? This is like professional level writing. I literally could not stop reading it 😂 amazing job!! You should fr find a way to turn this into a story and get it published. I'll be the first in line to buy it 💪

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Really?? 😂Well thank you!! Happy you enjoyed it.

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You're welcome! And yes, definitely. This needs to be a book 💯

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😂😂maybe someday🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

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bettt 😎

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Bloody hell! I didn’t know you could write like this!!!! I was glued to my phone! My head hurts now and everything is blurry because I was so focused!!

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Lol🤣 Thank you! Glad you liked it.

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Are you going to make it a book? Or was it just this?

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I am working on part 2 right now. It will be about the same length, maybe a little longer.

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Can’t wait!

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Finally had time to read this! And I'm so glad I did. I've been wanting to write a Western tale myself but haven't had the inspiration. But your story is so nicely put together with intense emotion, I could feel what Joel was feeling. I loved this, great job 🙌

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Aww, thank you! It makes me so happy that you liked it😊

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Thanks to Alex for sharing Margot's talents with the world. I appreciate that. And Margot, you are a really good writer. Please keep it up. You must have a very supportive family. Loved the story.

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The beginning paragraphs drew me right in. Really great writing!

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Thank you, Nick!

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Good job, Margot.

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Ayyyyyy, you finallyy read it. 😂

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